Tuesday, September 13, 2005

So Long and Thank You for the Note

This morning I received a brochure from MSA Kargo, a local shipping company. Exercising great customer-oriented skills, they slipped a thank you note in front of the brochure that said

Trust is your
expectation,
and it's our
proud.

From the
honest heart,
we say
Thank You for
your trust.
From the bottom of my heart, I thank YOU for the cheerfulness your brochure brought for the rest of this day.


SUBMISSION WANTED: MORE "POETIC" WAYS TO SAY THANK YOU...

...of which companies all around the world should be using instead. For instance,
Roses are red,
violets are blue.

You know what's so great?
My way to thank you.
Of course you can do better than that. Just fire away in the comment box!


BLOGGING POSTMORTERM

My blogging self had been comatose because I was unable to compose a blog entry under fifteen minutes (an ability which I need to master these days).


UPDATE: OUT OF THE [COMMENT] BOX
  1. Chilli is spicy,
    sugar is sweet

    Thanks for making us busy,
    your business is a treat.

    --Garry Arif


  2. As the King said "Avast!"
    knights scorned the bayou
    My rhymin' ain't no more pretty
    than Milli Vanilli

    This whole thing was just
    intended to thank you
    But spewing out poetry
    feels so silly.

    --Ads Addict


  3. mouse feels like blueband(tm)
    keyboard is black in pain

    its nice to have you as a client
    please come back again

    --snydez


  4. thank you is a nice touch
    but i really don't want to try too much

    --serenity

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

nice blog !! salam kenal !

garryarif said...

Roses are red,
violets are blue.

Thanks are seldom said,
thank you i say to you.

garryarif said...

Chilli is spicy,
sugar is sweet

Thanks for making us busy,
your business is a treat.

Anonymous said...

As the King said "Avast!"
knights scorned the bayou
My rhymin' ain't no more pretty
than Milli Vanilli

This whole thing was just
intended to thank you
But spewing out poetry
feels so silly

___

PS: I wish I could compose ads under fifteen minutes. Would've made my life a breeze.

snydez said...

mouse feel like blueband (*merk terdaftar)
keyboard is black in pain

its nice to have you as a client
please come back again

***ngasal :D :D

Anonymous said...

...pride.

not proud?

Anonymous said...

halloooo

Isman H. Suryaman said...

Nice to meet you too, viga. I visited your blog, but just couldn't find a topic I can comment on.

Thanks for the submissions, garryarif and snydez.

What do you do in the advertising business, exactly, Ads Addict?

That's the actual copy, ephe.

garryarif said...

i work as in-house designer and advertising manager on a small apparel company in los angeles.
whatabout u ads addict?

serenity said...

thank you is a nice touch
but i really don't want to try too much

*the it rhymes dance*

Anonymous said...

Selamat Hari Raya Idul Fitri Isman and Fam...Mohon maaf lahir batin yaa....

Anonymous said...

Bang Isman, aku Hirta, salah satu moderator dan panitia lomba HUT Blogfam.
mau minta kesediaan bang Isman jadi salah satu juri lomba entry.
Aku tulis juga lewat PM, pesan ini ya. Ditunggu jawabannya. Terima kasih sebelumnya :)

yaya said...

Hi man
nice to meet the one

You whose writings nobody will doubt no more

*duuuh susah harus berirama :(
mas...komen tulisanku donk :) Udah layak tidak kalo Yaya buat buku?